Thursday, July 18, 2019

Sweet Madness (A story I wrote for a Short Story Writing Contest)












Sweet Madness

Intense, maybe.  Passionate, definitely.  Now, who stole Jeffrey’s donut?


Squish-crunch.  Squish-crunch.

Jeffrey focused on the sound his feet made as he walked on the semi-packed snow.  He was trying to keep his mind clear, and figure out: who had eaten the last donut at base camp?

It wasn’t that Jeffrey was crazy.  He was a little intense, maybe.  And passionate.  Yes, that was it.  Passionate.  That’s why he was here in the first place.  At work, the office assistant, John, had used Jeffrey’s stapler without asking, and Jeffrey may have heard this and then picked up his stapler and thrown it at John while screaming “you think office supplies are for everyone?!” But that wasn’t crazy.  Intense, maybe.  Passionate, definitely.  Jeffrey was passionate about staplers, and people touching his things.  Human Resources heard about the incident and recommended Jeffrey take a short sabbatical. Jeffrey couldn’t understand why there was a problem.  Wasn’t he just making sure the company’s office supplies were being used properly? Jeffrey’s neighbor Todd suggested Jeffrey “take a hike”.  Jeffrey knew Todd was only kidding, even though Todd had no sense of humor.  Like when Todd claimed that he couldn’t control the leaves of his tree landing on Jeffrey’s property, so Jeffrey let his dog take a crap on Todd’s porch.  Jeffrey thought it was funny.  Todd didn’t.  But Jeffrey took Todd’s suggestion to heart, and then did all the work and training he needed to be able to sign up with a tour group to hike up Mount Everest.  

And now, here Jeffrey found himself, hiking up Mount Everest with a group of people he’d only known for the past few days.  They had done small hikes together and rested at base camp together.  They cooked meals and worked together.  Jeffrey was frequently partnered with Duncan.  Duncan was a big guy with a bigger smile and a loud, annoying laugh.  Duncan’s voice was loud too, which is probably why Jeffrey could so easily hear him say to the Sherpas “look, I’m happy to help Jeffrey out, but it would be nice to have time away from the crazy guy.  I need a break.”  But Jeffrey figured that Duncan was talking about someone else.  Not him.  Never him.  Intense and passionate.  Never crazy.  

On the first day of the tour, someone arrived with a box of donuts to share with everyone, and passed it around during the get-to-know-each-other session (the Sherpas playfully called it “An Icebreaker on Ice”.  Everyone giggled.  That’s when Jeffrey realized he was the only normal person in the group.)  Jeffrey watched everyone take a donut, but he didn’t.  He wanted to save his for the morning of the final push to the summit.  He left it in the box and knew nobody would take it.  As they told each other a bit about themselves, Jeffrey stood up and made quite clear to everyone what stuff was his (including the last donut left in the box), and how none of it was to be touched by anyone.  Everyone just sat there except for Duncan, who got up and put his extra-large hand on Jeffrey’s shoulder and reassured him that nobody would go near his stuff.  But somebody had.  That morning he went to the cabin where he’d left his donut in the box, but it was gone.  The trek up to the summit was ruined before it even started.

 Now the group was hiking up the mountain.  One Sherpa was in front, the other in the back.  The people in the tour group walked in single file between them:  Megan, Bridgette, Claire, Frank, Duncan, and then Jeffrey.  Jeffrey thought about each of them.  Claire and Frank were a couple. Maybe one of them stole it for the other as some kind of romantic gesture before they took on the most dangerous act of their ridiculously lovey-dovey lives (at the “Ice Breaker on Ice” session, they were holding hands!  In front of everyone!)  Bridgette and Megan had been friends for 30 years, enjoying an adventure together.  Jeffrey couldn’t understand staying friends with someone so long, so clearly there was something wrong with both of them.  One of them must have taken it.  It was Bridgette, Jeffrey decided.  Definitely Bridgette.  She was shorter.  It all made sense.

The Sherpa in front stopped and turned around. “Let’s take a quick break,” he said.  This was Jeffrey’s chance to confront Bridgette, that donut stealing bitch.  He wasn’t going to do anything.  He just wanted to talk to her and remind her to stay away from his stuff.  Maybe he’d yell.  Maybe he’d throw his oxygen tank at her.  He was keeping his options open.

As Jeffrey walked past Duncan, he heard Frank ask him, “Hey, Duncan, is that blood on your parka?”  Jeffrey turned.  Blood was always interesting.  Duncan looked at the back of his arm and then let out a booming laugh.  Jeffrey’s eyes darted up the mountain to see if it had set off an avalanche.

“Hah, look at that,” said Duncan.  “Nope, not blood. Jelly from that donut I found in the cabin at base camp.”

“DONUT?” Jeffrey asked.  Was he screaming?  No, probably not.

Duncan spun around at Jeffrey’s voice, and then smiled.  That stupid, big smile.  “Oh, hey, Jeffrey.  Yeah, I needed a little time away – from the group – so I offered to clean up that cabin we were hanging out in.  There was one donut left in the box, so I threw it out. Must have gotten some of the jelly on myself.”

Jeffrey glared.  Duncan noticed.  “Hey, man,” he said, “I forgot you were saving it.  No need to get crazy, though, right?”

“Sure,” said Jeffrey, as he felt his heart beating in his ears.  “No problem.”

The Sherpas called out that it was time to continue.  Everyone lined up again.  Jeffrey stared at Duncan’s back.  Duncan was right.  No need to get crazy.  Intense, maybe.  Or passionate.  But not crazy.  Jeffrey pulled his ice axe out of his pack and put it in his hand. His stapler throwing hand.

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